An oxymoron. This suggests the dreamlike quality of this haiku, which is also implied by “hiking into the clouds.” The third line in this haiku – “and nothing beneath” – suggests that in this dreamlike reality everything is elevated. Even the rocks up here are not grounded but, like the fog, up in the air and closer to God, or the sun, or the dream, or whatever constitutes the high point of this reality.
Beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much. Nature inspires outward the beauty latent in words.
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What is rock fog
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An oxymoron. This suggests the dreamlike quality of this haiku, which is also implied by “hiking into the clouds.” The third line in this haiku – “and nothing beneath” – suggests that in this dreamlike reality everything is elevated. Even the rocks up here are not grounded but, like the fog, up in the air and closer to God, or the sun, or the dream, or whatever constitutes the high point of this reality.
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Damn. You always have so much intention behind each line. I really love that about your work
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