I write, act, and produce films in Los Angeles. Everything else is conjecture.
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4 thoughts on “Stay Awhile Haikus”
“fog in my pocket” and “breakfast with the moon” are definitely my two favorite lines.I also love how the whole thing skips along like the skipping stones in the first line. Very well designed. I love it.
Thank you so much for your comments. Indeed, the sojourner can skip further than he can walk. All he or she needs is a certain lightness of soul and willingness to hitch a ride now and then with the wind.
“fog in my pocket” and “breakfast with the moon” are definitely my two favorite lines.I also love how the whole thing skips along like the skipping stones in the first line. Very well designed. I love it.
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Thank you so much for your comments. Indeed, the sojourner can skip further than he can walk. All he or she needs is a certain lightness of soul and willingness to hitch a ride now and then with the wind.
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Great writing!
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Thank you so much for your comment. Words are the food of the soul, and poetry is the spice.
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